Thursday, July 25, 2013

Grandma's Cupboard

Grandma’s Cupboard
A Free Verse Poem
by Jonathan Williamson

Some of Grandma’s furniture
lives at our house now.

My favorite is a tall wooden cupboard.
It is golden oak, soft and worn
and it is very,
very old.

It takes me back to Grandma’s.
I open its glass doors,
and it smells like her living room
a thousand miles away,
with someone new living in it now.

Now, at my own house, in my own living room,
I open the cupboard doors,
I take a deep breathe,
and WHOOSH!
I am back at Grandma’s house once more.
The cupboard says,
“Welcome back! Good to see you!”

  1. Make Observations & Ask Questions
    1. Think: Write what you observe or have questions about (use this form for ideas) (2 min).
    2. Pair: Share a few of your responses with your team (2 min).
    3. Share: As a team, choose 1-2 ideas to share with the class (2 min).
  2. Define a Problem or Form a Hypothesis
    1. Write a statement or question about one of the text's major messages or methods (2 min).
    2. Consider using some of the following sentence frames:
      1. *The author ____________ in order to _______________.
      2. The author conveyed that _________________ by ____________________.
      3. The author's message of ________________ was supported/undermined by ____.
      4. Although the author attempts to _______________, __________________.
  3. Develop a Plan
    1. Identify general structures, messages, methods, and/or other elements to imitate (either based on teacher suggestions, team collaboration, or individual opinion) (2 min).
      1. ex: keep short first stanza introducing the item, a descriptive middle section using imagery, and personification with something said by the object at the end.
    2. Consider what structures, messages, methods, and/or other elements you’ll specifically change
      1. _____(noun)_____'s ____(noun)________    <someone/something you know>
  4. Conduct & Analyze an Experiment
    1. Write your own imitation of the original text (if doing this as a class, wait for the teacher to model their own version of how to imitate the original text) (10-15 min).
    2. Re-read the original and your version to consider what to change in yours by making it similar to or different from the original (3 min).
  5. Communicate Results & Improve
    1. Share the original text and your imitation with someone (2 min)
    2. Have a conversation with them about what was good and what could be considered for change (see the chart below) (3 min).
    3. Re-read your text and experiment with at least one of the considerations for change (3 min).